The translation was actually pretty simple. I think I'd gotten at least 90% done with Sono Go by this point, so I blew through this in about two days . I'm actually a bit embarrassed at some of the non-porn dialogue now that I'm looking over it, though.
I'm not sure what the third panel on page 7 meant. There were some earlier Eva works by this circle, but they aren't online.
Penis Notes: ... I'm guessing by the circle name and by... page 32... that at least the artist is female. I guess it's proportional to his body, but it looks more like a primitive club than a dick, especially with the color change.
My favorite line from this one is "Oh god, does she have a semen fetish or something?" ("Iya... boku no seieki kakerarete yorokobu no wa kimi dake datte...."), and my favorite kanji from this one is :
Eki, "fluid; liquid; juice; sap; secretion".
You're damn right it's a 'boyfriend look'!